翻译-Meet With Angle by Accidentally.

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Meet With Angle by Accidentally
I am a kind of person, who likes venture and sees world. When I moved to new place or was business trip to some where I never forget to take a strolling around the town of city, willing to find new things to satisfy my learning desire and enjoy culture, customs, and civilization of native folks. Having spent a half day in a tour of French Quarter I was on the way back to home in an indulgence of satisfaction. Metro buss was running with many turns and stops, like taking me in to a puzzle palace, every soon I had lost the direction to home. With my self-confidence to know street name well on the map defeated in many times I had gradually grown up a good manner that I like to ask for people help when I feel something wrong on my way to home. After took off a buss I looked around to make sure where my next destination buss is. A lady caught my eye attentively, cream skin doll face with big eyes, high frame nose and slim body appearance in 100% cotton suitable lady’s suit. Hi, would you please show me what buss going to Causeway? I said politely in timid voice and stuttered English. ”Across street and I will take that buss too.” she pointed out by hand and said with a silk smooth voice. Late we had almost a hour’s conversation under the sky at buss station on waiting buss to come. A strong sun light was burning my skin of neck and heating my body to hot as well. She seriously told me story of how people struggled from hurricane and was recovery to rebuild home, but my mind had been wildly gone on her beautiful doll face. Angle! Where are you from? Soon a buss came I took on buss to my home. It was time to say good bye to her when the buss stopped my place. I bowed my head and said to her: Good Bye, wish to see you again. The buss was faded away in distance but my mind had been conquered by her doll face. I do hope I would see her some where or sometimes again for good luck. 字串4
Continuance is at next time.

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Meet With an Angel by Accidentally.

Meet with an Angel by Accidentally
I am a kind of person who likes venture and likes to see the world. Whenever I move to new places or on business trips to somewhere, I never forget to take a stroll around the town or area. I am helpful and willing to find new things to satisfy my learning desire to enjoy culture, customs, and civilization of native folks. Having spent a half day in a tour of French Quarter, I was on the way back to home with an indulgence of satisfaction. The Metro bus was running with many turns and stops, like taking me in to a maze. Very soon, I had lost the direction to home and my self-confidence to know street names on the map. I had grown with good manners and I would like to ask people for help when I feel something wrong. I wanted to ask someone, but I lacked the courage. After I missed my bus destination, I looked around to make sure where the next bus was. A lady with cream skin, doll face with big eyes, high frame nose and slim body appearance, and in 100% cotton suitable lady’s suit caught my eye. I gained my courage and said, “Hi would you please show me what bus is going to the Causeway?” I said it politely and in a timid voice stuttering in English. She replied with a silk smooth voice and pointed by a hand, we get off the bus at next stop, we will cross street, and I will show you the way. Later we had almost an hour’s conversation under the sky at bus station while waiting for a bus come. A strong sun light was burning the skin of my neck and heating my body as well. She told me a serious story of how people struggled from hurricane and the recovery to rebuild their homes, but my mind had been concentrating wildly on her beautiful doll face. Angel where are you from? Soon a bus came and I took a bus to my home. It was time to say good-bye to her when the bus stopped at my place. I bowed my head and said to her, “Good-Bye and I wish to see you again”. The bus faded away in distance, but my mind was concentrating on remembering her doll face. In despair, I hoped I would see her somewhere or sometime again in the future.

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It is a beautiful story and a good writing. However, I have found some mistakes, such as, THE SENTENCE STRUCTURES, TENSES that I have corrected. If you compare with the original of yours, you will find the difference. The words are in UPPER CASE that is my suggestion for you to refer.^_^
该回答在2006年9月1日由回答者修改过

网友解答:感谢Faye的精彩解答
网友解答:是谁啊,英文好好哦

网友解答:what do you want us to do?

网友解答:街角的偶遇/邂逅
我一个喜欢冒险和了解世界的人. 当我搬到新地方或是公干(商务旅行),我永远不会忘记环游过的城市,总是可以找到新的东西来满足我的愿望,学习和享受文化、风情、民间乡土文化.

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